Saturday, November 13, 2010

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I so feel like crashing down on your bare chest-
Disheveled.
Your hands on my bare back-
Pristine.
A Linen that
Failed to cover us.
Nothing but the light of our eyes.
Breathes. Heartbeats.

Every thing in Silence.
Everything in Dark.

Baby, I allow you to light a cigarette. For the aura of smoke and the light it would add.

16 comments:

  1. Maar dala...... Oh... Maar dala....

    Kya likhti ho mam...
    Bahut khoob.... bahut khoob....

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  2. romantic and sensual .... a tinge of pain ... keep walking!!!

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  3. Wow! That is whats called simple-short-sweet.
    Lovely!

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  4. CU:yup. :) Bhalo theko.


    Sandhya: tum aur tumhare comments..dono paagal per sweet :)


    Amit da: Thanks :) Happy to see you after a long pause.

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  5. Soumyaranjan: Thanks. :)

    I visited your blog and i must say i really liked it a lot. Wanted to comment but that facility isn't there.So letting you know it here for if you happen to visit again.


    Ganesh: Thanks :)

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  6. touched a part of me i didnt realize was alive and thriving!

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  7. :O *goes back and reads again*
    :O *reads the comments*
    :O wuts happening? white window wud roon become red hot if words like this pour in :D

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  8. Awesome! Typical your style!!! Just too good sweets.

    And I must say, I am loving your new template!

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  9. CU: Surely. Sorry for the delay though.



    Raka: Dear your are a lively soul..don't ever doubt that a bit.

    Thanks :)

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  10. Anizie: Thank you hai ji :o :o :o .... kya re accha laga ya ni..yeh kaun batayga??? :l :D..



    Akanksha: Along with you by default happiness comes hither. :) Thanks a lot sweet♥

    Sorry couldn't comment yet on your Delihi Diaries though i have read it.

    (((HUGS)))

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  11. bilkul acha laga na :) isiliye inni bar pada :P veyse aapne bataya nahi kya ho raha hein :P

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  12. so passionate and pristine preeti! :)

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  13. I can read this over and over again...sooooooooooo truly, hopelessly romantic... :-)

    I could visualize the pristine Pree enjoying the moment....lols....

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plz.. open d white window :)