Sashaying with her lilac dreams
She longs for that day… to be with him.
With glowing candles and flowing satins
She waits for him… with her eyes full of dreams.
In a music band… he works so hard
And composes songs…straight from his heart.
But in evry lyric and in each tune
He finds only his sweetheart demure.
The glowing candles and the flowing satins
Will witness today… the two hearts confessing!
He with a song straight form his heart
And she with her eyes killingly dark
Will create a mysterious magical spark
To change their dreams into a blooming lilac…!
~~~***~~~
She longs for that day… to be with him.
With glowing candles and flowing satins
She waits for him… with her eyes full of dreams.
In a music band… he works so hardAnd composes songs…straight from his heart.
But in evry lyric and in each tune
He finds only his sweetheart demure.
The glowing candles and the flowing satinsWill witness today… the two hearts confessing!
He with a song straight form his heart
And she with her eyes killingly dark
Will create a mysterious magical spark
To change their dreams into a blooming lilac…!
~~~***~~~
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!
ReplyDeleteMagical,mystical,romantic lilac dreams.So passionate and so innocent at the same time!
Wonderful piece of poetry there sweetheart,what a great way to come back :)
Keep writing always,no matter what!Love you loads.Muaaaaaaaaaaah!
P.S. Lovely template!Our Dumbi is a pro :P
very nicely composed . It has a soothing touch of pure love percolating into the characters , that is solemnised by "lilac Dreams."
ReplyDeleteAlso some wonderful metaphors used along with some perfect pic suitng the ambience.
Nice to see u back with Your Lilac Dreams and this happens to be one of your best works one has ever read .
Keep churning many such beautiful poetries .
Take care .
Nice come back with a bang girl.
ReplyDeletehave i ever told you that lilac is my favourite color? ;)
ReplyDeletePoem is awesome preetu sweetu, amazing portraying of pure love :)
you are the best!! Keep writing dear!
Love you lots :)
Pree, I got the secret to your poetic skills :P
ReplyDeleteYou first search for good pics on google and build the lines accordingly :P
Right?
btw, lovely template, say thanx to me!!
and yes sami, i am a pro in designing templates :) :)
lolz why some people love getting all the applause for no work done :D
ReplyDeleteBut then they at least admit they are dumb :D
ur posts r good read...& nice layout too.
ReplyDeletekeep writing
Welcome back my dear! Miss you lotsa!! Hope you'll stay much longer this time around before you go for another 'off':)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem came deep from your heart,just beautiful.
Cu around my dear.Keep writing,love reading your postings!Muahhss.
p/s yeah rite! Well done for the template..I think I knew who made that:)
ReplyDeleteHi..kothai chole geichile etho din baba..What was the confession like
ReplyDeleteShob theek tho ?
TC
CU
hey wow
ReplyDeleteits nice poem is really good
i liked thse line
"The glowing candles and the flowing satins
Will witness today… the two hearts confessing!
He with a song straight form his heart
And she with her eyes killingly dark"
its really good
am here for this first time...
i hope to be here ba ck
and ur blog is awesome with too many awards from frnds :p
check my blog
www.diablolord.blogspot.com
hey what a nice way to come back :)..welcome back
ReplyDelete....oooooooh!what is that?...an Lilac's Ode?..... or a Love's Ode and its first emotions?....any way, from now i'll Speak only on lilac flowers with vernal Love perfume........... Wawwwwwww !where is my youth?:( :(
ReplyDeleteahh... beautiful Poem :-)
ReplyDelete@sameera..
ReplyDeletethnx a lot angel... it wud not hv bn easy 4 me 2 mk a come bk without ur love, support n encouragemnt.
yes i will kp writing always dear..just u b thr with me alwys.
n yes our dumbi is a pro aftr all she is d smart dumbi.
love u loads...huggss..muahh
tk cr
:):):)
@ indro..
ReplyDeletethnx a lot dear... lilac dreams wud not hv bcm a reality if u wr not thr with me thru thick n thin.
thnx a lot fren
tk cr
:):):)
@priya..
ReplyDeletethanx a lot dear.
tk cr
:):):)
@lenu-janu..
ReplyDeleteno janu u hvnt told me but somehow i knew it always deep inside my heart .. :)
thnx a lot janu.. i am glad that u along with sami n divvu loved d poem. u knw it that without ur love n support it wud not hv bn possible 2 write agn.
janu if i am d best thn u r d bestest...actualy we all r :D
love u loads...huggss..muahh
tk cr
:):):)
@shonu divvu...
ReplyDeleteoh my god..u got my secrets to write poem...gosh...:P
divvu so ur nxt poem will be a beautiful poem rite?... if u cnt find any good pics on google..let me know.. i will hlp u out...lol :P
n thnx a lot 4 being a PRO-blem in designing tempus....wat do u say sami n lenu?? he he he :D
love u loads...huggss..muahh
tk cr
:):):)
@ lenu..
ReplyDeletejanu kp on wondering y some ppl r so dumb...lol.. :P
thnx 4 d templt janu.. its d best templt u hv eveR designd till now... r u listning shonu divvu.. :P
love u loads...huggss..muahhHH
tk cr
:):):)
@ASWINI...
ReplyDeletewelcome to my White Window.
thnx 4 bng here and for ur appreciation. n abt d layout all credit goes to Lena.
kp visiting
tk cr
:):):)
@ noushy...
ReplyDeletethnx a lot dear for ur appreciation as well as missing me loadsa..
ya evn i hope 2 be hr for a really long time bfr i tk anothr long off.. :D
ya u guesses it rite..all credit goes to my lenujanu for designing d templt.
love u loads...huggss..muahhhh
tk cr
:):):)
@ Compassion..
ReplyDeletekothao jai ni dear fren..just blog world theke ektu chuti niyechilam.
confessing what?... he he he :D
hai shob thik acche ..infct shob khub bhalo acche.:D
bhalo theko always
:):):)
@stephen..
ReplyDeletewelcome 2 my white window. thnx for loving n poem n my blog n 4 appreciating me.
i hv bn 2 ur blog..its awesome..loved it too.
keep visiting
tk cr
:):):)
@rambler..
ReplyDeletethnx a lot fren.
tk cr
:):):)
@ olimpia...
ReplyDeleteoh! mama! glad 2 c u hr. wowww ur commnt is sooooo sweeeeeeeet. oved it soooooo muchhhhhhh :)
mama ur youth is inside ur heart... u r n evergreen young lady. :)
love u loads...huggss..muahh
tk cr
:):):)
@ raaji..
ReplyDeletethnx a lot dear raaji. :)
tk cr
:):):)
mesmerizing
ReplyDeletelook who's back?!!! yeay!!!your lilac dreams is so beautiful, I want to copy it in my diary. :)
ReplyDeleteHi di,
ReplyDeleteGlad t see you bck afta so long....wonderful an lovely as usual! Ur poems have so much depth i them....do teach me how you do that :P
BTW, you have missed much that u can't catch up on LOL!
one of the most beautiful poems i have read...
ReplyDeletekeep writing
You're really good in writing poem.. like Sameera.. I have to learn and make one..
ReplyDeleteAny idea on how I can write for curry and egg poem?
;)
ridiculous!! i am being called a problem?
ReplyDeleteok, say good-bye to ur problems!! :x
Hi Preetilata,
ReplyDeleteIt's wonderful that you are back again to blog. I savor every word of your poem. They speak of your dreams and emotions. They speak from your heart and soul. I hope you will keep on writing. Thanks again and God bless.
welcome back ......
ReplyDeleteru in love ???????
good lyrics and written..
these words can only be flown when a person is in love and i hope so u too are.......:)
keep writting...
Take Care
Vikas{V}
hey ,well
ReplyDeletedo i need to say something about ur work....all i just need to say is that ur work is classic and gr8
btw i am stephen
and listen pls change my old blog link to new one
i redirected my old link to a new link
blogroll me as
www.thesolitarywriter.blogspot.com
stephen
@ Shal...
ReplyDeletewelcome to my blog shal and thanks a lot for encouraging comment.
Take Care
:):):)
@ Farah....
ReplyDeletethnx a lot farah...wowww i cudnt blv that u wnt 2 write it down in ur diary...wat n honour.
u know farah dear.. u r sooooooo sweet.
love n huggsssss
Take Care
:):):)
@ Meghna...
ReplyDeletethnx sweet sis...! look who is talking..one of d best writter in bloggervile.
sigh... i cnt catch upon ur posts.
take care
:):):)
@ Swatimala ...
ReplyDeletewelcome to my blog swatimala and thanks a lot for ur encouraging comment.
Take Care
:):):)
@ Curry egg..
ReplyDeletehey sweet curry...thnx a lot girl.
ya mix 2 eggs in a hearTful of curry and then add some of ur sweetness and then garnish it with a sweet-sweet smile :) ... thn ur curry egg poem will be ready to serve :D
Take care
:):):)
@ divvu...
ReplyDeletegosh! how cud i say goodbye 2 my such sweet cute problems.. i love thm sooooooo muchhhhhhhhh.
huggs my shona divvu :)
Take care
:):):)
@ Mel...
ReplyDeletethnx a lot mel... i wud always try 2 kp on writting. thnx a lot for ur encouragemnt support and appreciations.
Take care
:):):)
@ vikas..
ReplyDeletem i in love?? ... no...no dear..no ways..
if d poem conveys 2 u that m in love thn it is d most beautiful complimnt..
thnx a lot fren
Take care
:):):)
@ stephen,
ReplyDeletethnx a lot 4 ur appreciation friend.
sure i will chnge d url..thnx agn 4 informing me.
Take care
:):):)
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ReplyDelete"Sashaying..." What a brilliant word... and beautiful piece by the way.
ReplyDeleteThank you a thousand times for visiting me and encouraging me so! I'll tell you what, it's when a gifted writer (such as yourself) gives me a compliment that I am truly inspired.
Thank you dear friend!
Fondly,
Jo
lovely lines...beautiful words full of romance & love...a hope & the magic of pure dreams...you take us into a complete heavenly world...Well written!
ReplyDeletehmmm
ReplyDeletewaiting for ur next post :)
dost mein to teri bahut badi pankah hoon.:-)
ReplyDeletewell...another fantastic romantic poem from the world of preetilata....tomar poem nie ki comment kori bolo to didi....sabakatai eto bhalo lekho....ebar bhabchi ekta kichu likhe comp e save kore rakhbo....tumi kichu likhle copy paste kore debo...[:P]...
ReplyDeletekhub bhalo hoyeche....
preeti....it's lovely....different....very soothing....very well composed as usual.
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