"Dandelion smiles
A disoriented smile
With the kiss of spring."
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Haiku is one of the most important forms of traditional Japanese poetry, where the poems are simple, small and not rhymed. It is nothing but a depiction of nature in its innumerable aspects.
Few simple rules for writing in this form of poetry are:
1. Three lines of verse consisting of five, seven, and five syllables.
2. Each haiku must contain a seasonal word, may not strictly be a typical one. For example: snow denotes winter.
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Dandelion puff!
ReplyDeleteFew days back I never knew these are dandelions! It's only when a friend of mine accustomed me of it's beauty that I learnt the name then...
Good work and excellent Haiku as always. Ravishing !
Though you might also like to try your hands in several other genres waiting for ur pen(wo)manship.
:)
wow....three lines...tell it all..!!!
ReplyDeletewonderful dear.....nicely written..!!!
Dandelions are amzingly pretty, and so was this haiku. I admire the talent of summing up things short. =)..
ReplyDeleteThe picture compliments the lines !
Ki bolbo..As usual simple & enchanting your haiku is
ReplyDeleteThanks for being in my Blog..
Bhalo,thumi kemon acho.Porikka Sesh hoyegeche na ki ? Chennai esho chuti the
TC
CU
@ indr,
ReplyDeleten i know who that friend is. :p ;)
Thanks a lot :)
yes sure i will try many more new genres. :)
@yamini,
ReplyDeletethanks a lot sweets. :)
take care
(((yams)))
@aayushi,
ReplyDeleteawww aayu baby thanks a lot dear.:)
n yes dandelions are just amazingly pretty. n u know what i am so happy to see dandelions blooming at my home. :)
(((aayu)))
@CU,
ReplyDeletethank you CU.
ami bhalo acchi and hai exams are over as of now. :D
hai i do want to visit chennai. lets c kobe hoy. :)
bhalo theko. :)
Haikus... Remind me of the Latin phrase - Multum, in parvo.
ReplyDeleteAs the clichéd adage goes - beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder.
Peace. Be well.
Wow!!! :-)
ReplyDeleteAdmire you for this...I dont believe it is eazy to write a thing like that!
Great work babes!
Loved the pic too!
That was lovely dear!A beautiful ode to spring :)
ReplyDeleteThe pic compliments the Haiku so well.
Love you Angel!Hugsssssss
Hey I really liked this. So nice and short description of spring!
ReplyDeletewow... you made it look so easy... i'm tempted to write one myself now :P
ReplyDeletenice one Preeti :)
wow... lovely haiku to welcome the Spring :)
ReplyDeletetake care and have a nice day mate... cheers...
@ kartz,
ReplyDeletemaltum? .. i never heard of them. :(
thanks a lot kartz. n yes beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder. :)
take care :)
@akanksha,
ReplyDeletehehehe :D thanks akanksha dear.
n no its not tough. try it n u will know it dear. :)
me adore u in any case:p
(((hugs)))
@sameera,
ReplyDeletethanks a lot dadimum. :)
i knew u wud like d pic. :)
umahhhhhhhhhhhh
((((angel))))
@meera,
ReplyDeletethanks a lot dear :)
take care :)
@mehreen,
ReplyDeleteo wowwwww... mehreen do u realize after how long u hv visited mine? :p
thanks a lot dear. its quite easy. and now i am tempted to read urs haiku. :)
take care :)
@arv,
ReplyDeletethanks mate.
wish u too a a nice day.
take care. :)
yaar yeh haiku mere palle nahi paditi ..but ha wordings are gr8.....i tells u a lot in two lines......right angel :)
ReplyDeleteTake Care
Vikas{V}
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ReplyDeleteHey sweet sis...
ReplyDeletegood one... but this post would be fulfilled if u had written ur special haiku.....
yeyyy haikus are back :P
ReplyDeletewow! i am proud of you.. :)
ReplyDeletecheck my haiku here.. sometime...
http://themushfactor.blogspot.com/2009/03/grave.html
@vikas,
ReplyDeletekya dost maine itne acche se sanjhaya phir v tumhe samajh ni aaya? :( x(
waise thanks for liking my haiku :)
@goirick,
ReplyDeletenah i wont say thank you to u at least. :D
i am glad that i am helping younger writers.but do u fit into dat category? u r too modest huh :D
hmm i really do wanna try my hand at many new things.
love,
take care :)
@ Vijayshryaln,
ReplyDeletethanks a lot.
but bro i dint understand what do u mean by "my special haiku" ??? :(
plz explain it bro
@anil,
ReplyDeleteoye they are always in. at least in my white window :p
n i want to read a haiku by u asap. :)
take care. :)
@kajal,
ReplyDeletewelcome here dear.
awwww... u made me so happy dear.
n yes i an off to ur blog soon aftr this :)
wow... its short and sweet! simple but means more. happy spring :)
ReplyDeleteare samaj mein to aaya...i was saying ki yeh likhna mere bas ki baat nahi .........:)
ReplyDeleteand yes i agree with ur comment on my blog......thanks for that and will try to write better......
and sorry for disappointing u this time :)
Take Care
Vikas{V}
waaah
ReplyDeleteyeh poets log khud k liye kinna kuch likh dete hai..matlab kuch bhi likho and and ek naya forma bana do :P
heheheheh
dandelion se mujhe ice age yaad aa gya...main ja rahoon ice gae dekhne :P
but achha tha..maine kabhi dandelion nhi dekha na..toh disoriented kiun hai samjh nhi aya :P
O waaa !!!!
ReplyDeletei wud definitely try. some day soon :P
ReplyDeletespl?? any of ur important haiku tat u wrote specially.. d best 1..
ReplyDeletehow nice an image u paint with ur words! :)
ReplyDeleteI've said this before I think... Haikus are one of my favourite forms of writing, but I've never been write one myself. I envy you!! :D
ReplyDeleteWonderful words...
Cheers...
I agree with Indrajit.. now when you are a master of haiku, try something different, sweets ;)
ReplyDelete"A disoriented smile" - Interesting!!! Well done!!!
ReplyDeleteHaiku is deep, i wish, and one day i will Haiku too:)
ReplyDeleteHaiku poetry
short and simple yet with a wealth of detail...What a composition gal...keep it up!:)
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