My soul is one widespread canvas
With shades and paeans of every color
Stories so different each color tells
Memories and mysteries each veils and unveils.
Entwined my life is with the strings of colors
Splashes of happiness they spur and spur.
Ensconced my soul is in the ocean of hues
My heart tranced, melts in the lap of muse.
Every word transpires to a lyric soulful
When the spirit soaked in color holds the tune.
Beams my life with radiance bright
When the seven colors blend into one pure White
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Your are a beautiful rainbow girl:)
ReplyDeletewow.....the splash of the colors..are all happy today....as you wrote about them..!!!
ReplyDeleteperfect write up friend...!!!
Loved it..!!!
Happy holi,...!!!
oh so beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteTo begin with, the font strikes the eyes, I always wanted to use this font in my posts. :)
ReplyDeleteTalking about the poem, perhaps this is one of ur most beautiful poems till date. It brings about a ethereal commentary in the landscapes of the mind and one gets to visualize the spiritual haven through this poem.
Every line woven is a magic in itself and the feeling is beyond words. A tender lyric , crafted with further tenderness. :)
And the pic is more than perfect for the post. :)
All the best for all ur forthcoming poems.
Buna Siera... ;)
I agree with Indrajit, this is one of the most beautiful poems you have written till date. And am so happy that you have written this poem about me! Goodii girl :P
ReplyDeleteJust perfect, sweetheart! :)
it was soo beautiful :)...i loved the pic :)..it made me smile :)..and the use of words was sooo nice....i loved this one most of all ur poems :)...keep smiling :)..
ReplyDeleteurs..hemu..
Wow...a life full of coulors...lovely!
ReplyDeletebeautiful piece of magic preeti! :)
ReplyDeletelife... colours... canvas.... harmony... beautiful...
ReplyDeleteloved it mate :)
have a nice day... cheers...
life..colours..smiles and preeti
ReplyDeleteloved ur blog hey!!
ReplyDeletecolorful..
ReplyDeletenice lines..!!
Never seen the spirit of Holi put quite that way before... very fresh, loved it...
ReplyDeleteCheers, and keep posting...
@ALLa heartfelt thnx to each one of u. glad that u hv loved my poem. :)
ReplyDelete@lena: u r a copy cat :p and yes i not only wrote this particular poem @ u but i started this blog with @ u. ck out my very 1st post :p
@blue-eyed-soul.... welcome here :) and thnx. hope to see u again. :)
preetzi, b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l.. luvd it :)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem dearie,wonderful usage of words.You have painted such a beautiful picture here :)
ReplyDeleteMay your soul always be as colorful and gay!Love you angel.Muaaaaaaaaah
(((HUGS)))
mast likha hai :P
ReplyDeletebut thoda complicated and kinnda old style...kuch naya likho...war pe...pain pe....
btw welcome back
One bright poem that is, full of the colors of life =)
ReplyDeleteStay as bright as that forever, and I wish the colors don't get washed away from your or anyone's life ever..
and cos I missed your last post, a very happy (belated)birthday to Lena..
very colorful! :) beautiful...
ReplyDeleteAmazing poetry as colourful as life itself!
ReplyDeleteWelcome back dear...how were the exams?
Happy Holi!
ReplyDeletewow gal! I liked the entire concept and the last two lyrical lines were the best summation for such a poetry!
Beautiful gal:)
@ ALL,
ReplyDeletethanks a lot to each one of u. :)
take care :)
Pulchritudinous, enchanting lines...
ReplyDeleteKeep 'em coming.
Peace. Be well.
Good job!!! Nothing beats the purity in the colour white, innit? I am really impressed with your work. Keep it up!!! I shall be following your blog from now on. Visit mine sometimes. Cheers!!!
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