Burning the heart and burning the soul
Tragedies befall when terror takes its toll.
Tears stop rolling but humanity cries
When marring the emotions; cruelty and hatred rise.
Deep under the grave happiness lies asleep
Seeing the wounds even the mountains weep.
In the name of God one kills the other
(With) those blood smeared hands then offers prayer.
'We' the human beings are shameless enough
To hide our sins under the religious turf.
Still "Hope" lingers everywhere around
New dreams reap from the blood stained ground.
One day, only love and peace will rule every heart
Let all of us unite and make a new start.
Lighting a candle my heart prays for the departed souls
May its light burn every evil that our hearts hold.
~~~***~~~
Terror can't kill the 'Spirit'!
Tragedies befall when terror takes its toll.
Tears stop rolling but humanity cries
When marring the emotions; cruelty and hatred rise.
Deep under the grave happiness lies asleep
Seeing the wounds even the mountains weep.
In the name of God one kills the other
(With) those blood smeared hands then offers prayer.
'We' the human beings are shameless enough
To hide our sins under the religious turf.
Still "Hope" lingers everywhere around
New dreams reap from the blood stained ground.
One day, only love and peace will rule every heart
Let all of us unite and make a new start.
Lighting a candle my heart prays for the departed souls
May its light burn every evil that our hearts hold.
~~~***~~~
Terror can't kill the 'Spirit'!
touching tha pt..i wonder why only i'm unable to put my feelings into words :(
ReplyDeletelovely poem :)
awesome words, sweetheart! very well crafted and so touching, dear! :)
ReplyDeleteWonder who has designed this template. Beautiful actually.
ReplyDeleteAnd very powerful poem.
Rhymed really well.
:)
What the world has Come upto !!
I just love the blog *-*/ awesome *o*
ReplyDeleteHey .Nice work. :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful last line.. that should be our mantra
ReplyDeletebtw the new template is very pretty.......
I dont' know how to open a blog? I love yur blog Priti.
ReplyDeletewonderful template....it remembers me of that dark sky that shows off everything it has......
ReplyDeleteand at the post...touched every corner of my heart....the pain can be felt every line of the post....
Long Live Mumbai and of course India....
awesome lines dear they r soo touching :)..
ReplyDeletetemplate rocks :)...
urs..hemu..
touching lines.. hope that peace will prevail over the terror...
ReplyDelete*bows*
ReplyDeletetouching lines...
and i hope that terror is forgotten soon and we get more happy memories to savour in the future...!
superb... :)
ReplyDeletereally liked the wordings... and well said in the end...Terror cant kill the spirit!! and i hope it doesnt!! :)
Amen!!!
touching wrds di....may the martyrs and innocent all rest in peace
ReplyDeletePEACE> AMEN!!
What is mankind without Hope???
ReplyDeletewell written mate... have a nice one... cheers...
hmm wat to say more...lets pray together
ReplyDelete@ divs,
ReplyDeletelook who is talking... the bestest poet of bloggerland :P
thnks shonu :)
@ lena,
ReplyDeletethank you janu. :)
@ indrajit,
ReplyDeletelol as if u dnt knw who made this templt. :p
thnakyou for the appreciation. glad that u liked it.
@ Antic,
ReplyDeletewelcome to my white window.
glad that you liked my blog.
thnks a lot.
do come again :)
take care:)
@ anwesha,
ReplyDeletewelcome here anwesha.
yes i completely agree with u.
thnks 4 d appreciation. glad that u liked it.
do visit again.
take care :)
@ surabhi,
ReplyDeletewelcome here.
thnks 4 d appreciation. glad that u liked it.
do visit again.
take care :)
@ raka,
ReplyDeleteglad that u liked it dear. thnks a lot
templt credit purely goes to my janu :)
@shalini,
ReplyDeletewelcome here.
thnks 4 d appreciation. glad that u liked it.
its very easy to open a blog. just go to d blogspot site and click on "create a blog" ... do open one soon and let me know. m waiting to read ur blog :)
do visit again.
take care :)
@yamini,
ReplyDeleteya i agree dear the templt is so romantic n... :) ..the credit goes solely to lenu.
thnks 4 d appreciation. glad that u liked it.
n yes nothing can destroy our motherland.
take care:)
@ hemu,
ReplyDeletethnks 4 d appreciation dear. glad that u liked it.
take care:)
@ hemu,
ReplyDeletelets pray for it together.
thnks 4 d appreciation. glad that u liked it.
@ vinay,
ReplyDeletethnks 4 d appreciation. glad that u liked it.
Amen to what ever u said.
@ ankur,
ReplyDeletethnks 4 d appreciation. glad that u liked it.
Amen
@ olimpia,
ReplyDeleteeven i feel the same mama. i wonder what d world has come upto. human bngs forgetting humanity. what an irony indeed.
thnaks a lot mama dear.
take care :)
@ meghna,
ReplyDeletethnks sweethearT. glad dat u liked it.
PEACE> AMEN :)
@ARV,
ReplyDeletemankind - hope = absolute nothing.
thnks 4 d appreciation. glad that u liked it.
@ neha,
ReplyDeleteyes lets pray together. :)
Wonderful template u have here... I assume Sameera's template charm has got you too... :)
ReplyDeleteRegarding the post, the picture represented a lot !!
May the souls of deceased rest in peace...
Amen.
Hi Preeti,
ReplyDeleteIt's been a long time since I visited your blog. First of all, congratulations on the anniversary of your blogging gang. May it last a hundred years or when your children take over that friendship.I hope you are happy and contented in your married life. I wish you the best of everything in this world. Thanks for visiting my blog and for the meaningful comments you left. God bless you always.
the appeal can't be better than this..strong words...and the pic..so very appropriate...
ReplyDelete:)
touching words yaar
ReplyDeletereally liked it
hope it never happens again
A touching piece...and as usual terrorism sucks..
ReplyDeleteand I do pray for the souls fof the departed....
and blog temp is so cute.... :)
Hie Preetuu! :))
ReplyDeleteThanks for telling me your back..varna I'd have been roaming around randomly,and not getting your blog URl back :(
And wow..what a post to start up your come back with..
Loved the line--> "Deep under the grave happiness lies asleep"
So true..this is for all the people who died..don't weep over their souls..when we murder the terrorism..out shall come their well-being.AMEN!
That deserved a round of applause..
ReplyDeleteThe mountains weep...what a line that was!!! Power-packed...loved it...
Very nice dear.....salute to ur thoughts and commitment...may all think the same the way you think...
ReplyDeleteTo be frank , muje blog ka naya look aacha nahi laga......
I hoep u wont mind !
Take Care
Vikas{V}
I think this is the pic that has to be placed in everyone's pooja room..
ReplyDeletehow r u doing dear..been a long time..
@ prashant,
ReplyDeletehi! welcome here.
thnx for liking the template. sami is wonderful in terms of making templates as well as writting. but this one is by lena. :)
yep lets pray that peace be upon all of us :)
visit again. :)
@mel,
ReplyDeletethanks.
@priya,
ReplyDeletethnks dear. happy to knw that u liked it :)
@stephen,
ReplyDeletethnaks ste.
yes me to hope d same :)
@ saurish,
ReplyDeleteyes terrorism suks.
thnks a lot :)
@aayushi,
ReplyDeletethnks aayu :)
hope all thz ends soon
@rajesh,
ReplyDeletethnks a lot friend. glad u liked it :)
@vikas,
ReplyDeletethnz dear. hope the whole world thinks alike.
tumhe mera blog temp accha nahi laga :(
Lovely poem dear!Indeed,terror cannot kill the spirit :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!I hope you don't mind my adding you to my bloglist?(even if you do, you can't stop me-lolzz.You write ver well).Am adding you...
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