Friday, September 4, 2009

Utopia ~


Lost in the woods of tranced milieu
I search thou not o dear soul
Wandering amidst the parched stream
Thou seem to me a worn out stone,
The songs thy lips once sang to me
Were cherubic enough to soak me in,
(Now)I find them nothing more than leaves
Dried enough to crumble in jiffy,
Lost in the woods I lose myself
Again and again with the wind insane,
Far from thy and far from me
The yellow wild flower
Seems purely alive.


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~Come'n guys, again it's time to pour down your interpretations about the poem.

~I know, I know, it's been so long since I am missing from all your blogs. Well it's not that i haven't visited your blogs at all but I am more of a silent reader all this time. Blame it on my tight schedule as well as on my poor net connection. I hope to be regular in sometime soon.

~ I feel so proud to tell you all that the new template was made by none other than 'Yours Truly'. And I just love this complete new look of my blog. I feel so fresh and happy :)

~ The above pic is designed by my brother Avinab.

31 comments:

  1. I am thinking of survival! I need to get back to this one. Bear with me. Nicely written!

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  2. and the poetry was awesome

    waht I concieved of the poem is u r seriously considering to join green peace :P

    and don't blame me...blame my unpoetic mind :D for the conclusion...good to have u back and loved the new template as well as the pic

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  4. AJEY

    thanks a lot. :)

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    SOURISH

    Thank u hai ji. :)

    greenpeace wont b bad at all to join. lol

    n ur mind might b unpoetic at present but ur soul isint. :P

    take care :)

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  5. beautiful!
    takes a little time with old english though :-)

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  6. HI Preetilata,

    Nice name..ANd a superb template..its very flourishing:)

    This post is a good one.
    Keep expressing :)

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  7. Dear,That was amazing!!!
    Nature at its best! Mother of all, and it can teach u lessons of life!

    Loved the template :) good work!

    And the pic was nice too!

    Chk this out
    http://shaadi-mania.blogspot.com/
    (my new blog)

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  8. Hi!

    You've got a new, beautifully created site design. Oh how i love it. I really admire your creativity.

    Wish to be able to create one as attractive as yours someday.

    Have a nice day!

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  9. I love the imagery in the poem. Great work, yet again :)

    And I so love your new template :)

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  10. I love the feel you portrayed in this poem ..good choice of words.:)

    New look is sensuous..i love it..!

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  11. RAAJI

    Thank you dear :)



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    PRAMODA


    A very warm welcome to my world pramoda.

    thanks for all the appreciations.

    it truely means a lot.

    Hope to CYA again :)

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  12. AKANKSHA

    u know dear, u r d only 1 who attempted to interpret the poem. n for that i just can't thank u enough. n yes i loved ur interpretation.

    yup, i read ur new blog. let me tell u dat its amazing and i am looking forward to read more.

    once again a big thank you along with a biggg bear hugggg :D


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    AMITY ME,

    Sis, thanks a lot for d appreciation. am so very glad that u loved d post as well as my new template. :)

    n u knw once upon a time even i used to say to myslf dat 'wish i cud make one someday'. but see here i am today making my own designs. so sis if i can do it thn u can too.

    n anyways u need not worry abt it. n we both know d reason y :D

    HUGS

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  13. LENU

    Dumbitooooooooooooooo do u knw something dat i LOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU :P

    thsnks dear. muahhhhhh

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    VYSHU

    hi dear. m so very glad that u loved it.

    thanks a lot :)

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  14. Ah! What a beautiful surprise! The new template rocks! It's full of freshness...

    And the poem is too GOOD! Very well-crafted... I like the way the lines blend - The tinge of nostalgia and the distant happiness.

    One of the best poems on blogosphere till date I have seen!

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  15. Interpretation: memoirs of childhood? some past love affair? I know I wouldn't have got it right - but this is a very beautiful poem!

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  16. oh wow!!tweenu..ye tune likha...?
    it was lovely!!...simply lovely
    it was very beautiful
    very very beautiful..

    love ya so much tweenu..
    HUGSSSSSSS :)
    n more
    HUGGGGGGGGSSSS :) :)

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  17. hi Ms. Pree,

    I missed you, and you're on leave at blogville for quite some time now...

    i miss your posts, maybe you're just yet busy with you college studies, never mind, i'll keep on waiting for a any new post from you and of course i overly excited about your project, you know what i mean sweetie...:-)

    studies first before anything else dear!

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  19. Nicely penned man!!

    whats up with yaaa?

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  20. as usual, its beautiful!!!!

    must u make us wait for soooo long before u give us ur literary delights?? don't u disappear again okies???

    (((((((((((hugs))))))))))))

    i had read this earlier preetilata, just wished to decipher it and come back...

    SIGH!!!! crafty admits defeat!! me can't deciper... when are u gonna provide answers??? am waiting with chin on palm.....

    hugs to ur bro for that pic too!! serene!! btw, was that pic a clue??
    i cudn't even decipher that!

    che che!!! crafty needs to go sharpen her interpretation skills!!

    i have written down ur "when it rains" from last post in my diary... i simply loved those line Preetilata! they are just beautiful!!!

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  21. as usual, its beautiful!!!!

    must u make us wait for soooo long before u give us ur literary delights?? don't u disappear again okies???

    (((((((((((hugs))))))))))))

    i had read this earlier preetilata, just wished to decipher it and come back...

    SIGH!!!! crafty admits defeat!! me can't deciper... when are u gonna provide answers??? am waiting with chin on palm.....

    hugs to ur bro for that pic too!! serene!! btw, was that pic a clue??
    i cudn't even decipher that!

    che che!!! crafty needs to go sharpen her interpretation skills!!

    i have written down ur "when it rains" from last post in my diary... i simply loved those line Preetilata! they are just beautiful!!!

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  22. the crudest n best lessons come from nature...
    n tats wat i see it all in ur lines...

    superb..!!!!!

    :):)

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  23. The new look is really refreshing ... love it ... and ur poem ... as always leaves me spell bound .... :)
    As you get lost in the woods, let me that a walk and get lost in your words .... keep walking!!!

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  24. Super!!! The template is so nice... gives life to what to write .. ;-)

    Keep writing! :)

    Blog rolling you..

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  25. wow! awesome poem dear... it well preserved nature and man.

    brilliant work on template. cute header :)

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  26. @Abhishek- o god! so much of appreciation. m honoured abhi. so very glad that u loved it so much. :)
    and about ur interpretation- no u r not wrong abhi. it might be that too as u r free to interpret in in ur own way. :) thanks a lot


    @Swati- na tweenu ye maine nahi. bole to mere ethereal spirit ne likha hai. :D was so very badly waiting for ya. paglitu agli baar late hui na to 100 utthak baithal :p

    thankchewww vely much :p

    muahhhhhh.hugs


    @Amity- so sweet of u sis. ur wait is over now :p


    @Standbymind- thanks mate. :) m good. hope u too r. :)

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  27. @crafty-

    first of all a big hug to u :D & no m not gonna disappear again at least not from my crafty's blog. :p

    u knw dear, i started writing this one with nothing particular in mind. i just started like dat and wen i finished it, i was like "duh! and wat does it means btw" :p. then a very close fren of mine rescued me out of it by deciphering it. which i found to be speaking the hidden truth of my heart. in short it is about my Utopian world :) but wat i feel is that no interpretation is ever wrong. people vary and so does d thinking and so does d interpretations and i so love reading different interpretations for the same poem.

    and thus d pic might contain d clue and might not too.

    i passed on ur hug to my bro sweets and it was so nice of u too note "when it rains" in ur dairy. and so another big huf for u right away :p

    do not knw wat all i wrote here. hope u wud understand it. :)

    thanks a lot. n ye ur comment means a lot to me. :)

    p.s: thr must b lots of typos. ignore them :p

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  28. @priya- loved ur interpretations dear. thanks a lot :)

    @anorak- ehehe...such a sweet comment. i always cheerish ur every visit to my blog. thanks a ton :)

    @Esther - so very glad i am. thanks a lot for ur visit, appreciation and ur for blogrolling and following me. followed and blogrolled u too. :)

    @jeevan- thanks a lot dear. u knw u r one of them whose comments i look forward too. nice interpretation. n so very glad that u loved d template.
    thanks once again :)

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  29. this has taken me from the heart of a troubled and pained soul yearning for love and finding hope ..lovely :)

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  30. @ANI-ASET- Is it ani? oh! m so very glad. thanks a ton. :)

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  31. satti bolchi di , tinte porechi , but jano to ektu lazy typer tai ekta tei cmmnt korlam . Lkha nie cmmnt korbo na , oto jogyata nei amr . But erm ekta didir bhai hote besh valo lage , jar blog er eto follower . tomar lkha ta guccho bhalo lage . luv u . tkcr

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plz.. open d white window :)