Mansi and I share a bond that got built over the bridges of words. She is one rare writer whom I adore to the core of my heart. What makes her so special to me is the way i feel connected to her via her words. Every time i read her i am in awe of her and what's more mysterious is the truth that i feel as if she is speaking my heart albeit in a much better and beautiful way. She is my darling and it's a pity that like my other good friend Mithe, she too seldom writes. Oh! dear girls, tell me what do I do to make you girls write?
Mansi blogs here at 'Let your heart do some talking...' Please visit and read her blog and I am sure you would be happily lost in her beautiful world of myriad thoughts.
And now, here comes my dearest Mansi to grace my White Window! Thank you dearest. :)
From Mansi's pen,
So here's my version ...Dont know you will like it or not....
The White Window reminds me of all those things that come to my mind when I think of a love-struck 'Heart'-emotions- feelings of love, compassion, longings, creative imagination, of fantasies, in a vividly captured world of some of the best moments of introspection one could have. As I am a fan of emotions too, of those random feelings which sway away, hiding from me, leaving me as fast as they could, but end up becoming part of my scribbles, I like how the White Window opens itself every time to a self confessed tale of a believer, who holds strong to trust, love and the smallest tid-bits which make life beautiful. Haven't been able to catch up lately, I wish Preety a lot of success and love in everything she touches.
Now, as I have the honor of writing a guest post ( I seriously don't have a clue how did I get here), I would love to write randomly as always. About anything that will cross my mind by the time I finish this sentence.
So, it would be some lines about a girl looking at the moon, peeking through her White Window.
No luck with the book, I heave a sigh and get up the chair,
A gaze at the clock, I put on my sleep robe, comb my hair.
Switch off the lights, it’s time to think off the day today,
A quick gaze at the moon tonight, and my thoughts vanish away.
It’s still not dark with those lights off,
while the moonlit sky over through my window shows off.
A staircase unfolds over my window, probably it's time,
The moon smiles while I blush like the Cinderella of a nursery rhyme.
It’s a whole new world, all bright and blue,
A dew drop on my window moves, and I take the clue.
As I climb, I feel so different, so new,
Love is what I feel inside,
as I take the dream flight.
The moon blinks and so do I,
Still staring out, I blink and smile, waving goodbye.
And I now know, what I was missing all day long,
A smile and for the while, my dreams tucked all along.
And thus, I slip between the sheets,
It's time to get the beauty sleep...
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You are one of my favorites Mansi. I did not only like your write-up but I am in love with it. My sincere apologies for the delay. Thank you for gracing My White Window with your beautiful poem and your kind and encouraging words about my blog.
ReplyDeleteI know a mere 'Thanks' won't suffice. Will a simple 'I Love You' do?
And please please never stop writing. And yes write more and more.
God Bless You my Dearest. <3
God bless you too sweetie :) May you see all ur dreams come true soon :) Thanks for putting it up..:)
DeleteThat was a way much of praise that you showered me with,dnt know if m worthy or not...:)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely beautiful and very sweet poem from her! I liked the last two lines much more... from your words and hers I could understand how close your expressions perhaps be. Sweet girls :)
ReplyDeleteThis is very sweet indeed! :)
ReplyDeleteLovely. :-) I am glad you got Mansi to write, Preetilata. The verse is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteNext time I look at the moon through the window, though the window be not white, I shall climb that imaginary ladder thanks to this poem. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely breathtaking and reminds me of many fairy tales in my childhood . Beautiful imagery Mansi . Thank You Pree for getting thi slovely blogger to write :)
ReplyDeleteThis is so sweet. It was like a animated fairy tale movie to me. Well done Mansi. Dont stop writing. Love ur poem
ReplyDeleteVery sweet and Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteP.S. I have nominated you for the Wonderful Team Membership Award, if you would like, do accept. :)
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Wow I have got huge encouragement..thank u all n thanks pree for letting me write :) what can I say..am really glad you guyd liked it..thanks a ton...
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