“It still lies there untouched for the past 8 years.”
“It had become impossible to live with your dad anymore Linda.”
“The dusts on it are proofs of my ruined childhood.”
“But now for your sake we are together again. We will bring back your good old days”
“Alas! But I have Grown Up mama!”
~~~***~~~
What is 55 Fiction? It is a fiction story, with all the basic elements of a narrative (plot, characters, setting, conflict), in 55 words or less(A non-negotiable rule).
Fantastic.
ReplyDeleteYou have been terrific of late composing one mssterpiece after the other and I would expect that it continues and I know it will-Amen.
Great work of skilfulness and artistry here.
This is technically sound, perfectly worded and wonderfully executed.
Keep exploring more such avenues.
Proud of being ur Fan...
Take care.
wow....nicely done ...how can all the aspects be done in a sinle stry :P...but yaar superb :)...
ReplyDeleteurs..hemu..
i wish i cud comment like indu :D :D
ReplyDeletewould a simple i love u do? :P :P
and of course...proud of being ur Fan, light,tv,bed and everything :D
wow the first two lines of my comment rhymed...too much into poetry these days :P
ReplyDeletewonderful... creation ... hats off to you my angel.. keep writing..
ReplyDeletei always wanted to try 55 fiction but me so scared, it needs a lot of talent to present a complte story behind a limited number of words. You did it wonderfully, said a lot with just few words, not everyone can handle this.
ReplyDeleteGreat work, sweets!
Love you :)
@ Indrajit,
ReplyDelete*blush*blush :P
thanks for your wishes. m glad that u liked it so much,
once again a big thanks to you.
take care :)
@Hemanth,
ReplyDeletea warm welcome to my blog.
thanks a lot for d appreciation. :)
do come again.
take care :)
@Divs,
ReplyDeleteyes, I LOVE YOU" is what i want from you. ;)...it is more than anything and everything.
n thnks a lot for being my fan, tv, light,....n monst importantly my CHIMPU :p
even i am proud of u dear an m one of ur biggest fan too.
n yes i hv alwayd told u that u r my poetry queen :)
love u loads.
hugs n kisses :)
@ dee dee,
ReplyDeletethnak u dee. :)
love n huggssss
urs,
dexter :)
@Lena,
ReplyDeleteso do u mean to say that i am that i am talented?? :P ;)
hahahaa... i am a smart-talented-dumbi :p
common write one soon along with a nonet :)
love you....huggsss n kisses
take care :)
Very well said and a good first try ther.
ReplyDeletelovely... it was supaaa niiice...
ReplyDeletekeep writing gal..
First a nonet and now this??? You seem to be teaching me something with every post... love it mate...
ReplyDeleteIt surely seems exciting.. will write mine over the weekend...
great job :)
have a good Saturday :)
cheers...
wow....fiction 55...kool thingy and ur very attempt was so successful :)
ReplyDeletegreat flow.. wana laff? coem down to my page
ReplyDelete...cultural appication, for my literary improving... I think is a piece of artistic resistence....
ReplyDeletePreety?..I like YOUR CREATIVE storage !......
definitely it is a success!! :)
ReplyDeletevery creative!! :)
it was good..but you can and will do better.
ReplyDeletemy best wishes.
@Priya,
ReplyDeletethank you dear.
take care :)
@PJ,
ReplyDeletethanks a lot dearie. why don't u give it a try too??
take care :)
@Arv,
ReplyDeletethats d best part of blogging. everyday we learn something new from each other.
thanks a lot arv.
do try both nonet and 55fiction. m eagerly looking forward to read urs.
take care :)
@ sourish,
ReplyDeleteye it's really a super cool thing. do try it.
m glad that u liked it. thank you
take care :)
@Chriz,
ReplyDeletewelcome to my "White Window".
glad u liked it.
sure will drop in to ur blog soon.
do come again.
take care :)
@olimpia,
ReplyDeletethanks for ur blessings mom. m glad that u hv loved it.
love u.
take care :)
@Vinay,
ReplyDeletethanks a lot :) m glad that u liked it
take care :)
@[v],
ReplyDeletewelcome here to my blog.
thanks for your wishes.
do come again.
take care :)
You have succeeded cmpletely. Never seen something as good as this :-)
ReplyDeleteFirst time here and liked your blog.:)
ReplyDeleteThats some awesome work here!
ReplyDeleteBravo :)
Preeti di...nice one....but u say it's the first try eh??/ IF this is the first one....I'm still wondering how good the tenth one wld be :P
ReplyDeletethis just ripped my heart. Good one!
ReplyDeleteThis is so awesome. Read Lena's and now yours. I don't think I can do this!
ReplyDeleteaverage e 20 ta comment to almost shob ta post tei poreche...khub baje...khub baje :(
ReplyDeleteShort sweet and great...
ReplyDeletenice attempt...
this 55 fiction is thing a tough one to do..!!
waiting for more..
:)
Ur blog template s nice!! For the first timr i'd come across the term, 55 fiction!! Cudnt believe its t first try!!!
ReplyDeletehmm
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@Sachi,
ReplyDeletewelcome to my white window.
thnks for the encouragement. m glad that u liked it.
do come again
take care :)
@Sneha,
ReplyDeletewelcom to my white window!
m glad that u liked my blog.
THANKS
do come again.
take care :)
@Shal,
ReplyDeletethanks a lot shal. glad to know that you liked it.
take care :)
@Meghna,
ReplyDeletetu kinni cute hai meghz. thanks for the encouragement. happy to knw that u liked it.
take care:)
@ solitaire,
ReplyDeletethnks a lpt sneha di. glad that u liked it.
u cn do it. just give it a try.
take care :)
@Raaji,
ReplyDeletethanks raaji,
take care :)
@ still thinking,
ReplyDeleteu r jealous n am so happy about it :P LOL :D ;)
take care :)
@vins,
ReplyDeletethnks. glad that u liked it.
its not tough at all. just give it a try.
take care:)
@ karthik,
ReplyDeletewelcome to my white window.
glad that u liked my blog and d template.
thnks for liking my 55fiction.
do come again
take care :)
joiedevivre,
ReplyDeletewelcome here.
thanks a lot.
take care :)
wow...the doll conveys so much in those 55 words....have learnt quite a few things from this visit yaar...too good....you are really good with fiction as well...each line packs a punch...
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful story,and conveyed in just 55 words!Wonderful work sweetie :)
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