Like morning raaga, it fills the heart
That kiss of sun, sparkling on the shoulder
Like the golden mischief that glints in your eyes
Like a gypsies magic, it spells all around
A little bit of honey and a lot of dew
A waif of air that carries folklore
The rustic elegance and the high heels of sophistication
Mysterious allure, and a mystic appeal.
Hidden beneath a layer of mist.
Spring is there in every step
Lovely, especially the last line When it simmers on my skin like a fresh sunbeam.
ReplyDeleteI'm just glad to see you are up and at it again when it comes to poetry :) You write gems, and no, I don't mean the chocolate ;) Beautiful post.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful! I loved these lines in particular :
ReplyDelete"That kiss of sun, sparkling on the shoulder
Like the golden mischief that glints in your eyes "
There's something about being alive in these lines... :D
Pree, so good to see you here, blogging again!!
ReplyDeleteAnd that's a beautiful one! ♥
Ah...so beautiful...I could smell it in your words! :)
ReplyDeleteThere is the scent of sweetness in your words, Preetilata. So glad to connect via AtoZ :)
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Introspection in Shades of 11
A to Z Challenge, 2014
This was so beautiful :) Your words spreading that sweet scent.. Aditi, from A2Z
ReplyDeleteVery sweet poem, resembling the certain sweetness of the scent! Beautifully writen:)
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the A to Z Challenge! Nice poem. I wish I could write poetry. A little haiku sometimes. But that's abut it.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! Such a lovely poem. ♥
ReplyDeleteVery interesting poetic format. Thanks.
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Very nice!
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Good to read ur unique poems again. This one full of fragrance.
ReplyDeleteI am also participating in A to Z- dropping by from there :) good luck
those lines are chocolate dipped and delicious,,beautifully penned
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Hello preeti how r u? It's long long time since I have been to blog world... Nice poem which brings new bright hope in ones life.
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vikas (V)
Hello preeti how r u? It's long long time since I have been to blog world... Nice poem which brings new bright hope in ones life.
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vikas (V)
Nice poem, It is amazing poem. I read many poem. Because poem is shared true story. I shared this poem in 24 hour Des Moines Towing site. Thanks for sharing this poem.
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