I so feel like crashing down on your bare chest-
Disheveled.
Your hands on my bare back-
Pristine.
A Linen that Failed to cover us.
Nothing but the light of our eyes.
Breathes. Heartbeats.
Every thing in Silence.
Everything in Dark.
Baby, I allow you to light a cigarette. For the aura of smoke and the light it would add.
Disheveled.
Your hands on my bare back-
Pristine.
A Linen that Failed to cover us.
Nothing but the light of our eyes.
Breathes. Heartbeats.
Every thing in Silence.
Everything in Dark.
Baby, I allow you to light a cigarette. For the aura of smoke and the light it would add.
Each post is better than the previous one! This one is simply outstanding. Saying that I love it would be an understatement!
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you took up this A-Z challenge because I am getting to read such beautiful posts from you!
This one is just breathtakingly beautiful! :)
Uff, kahan se nikal rahe hain yeh anmol ratan? I need the AC now!
ReplyDeleteOoh this ones quite a innovative piece :)
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness !!!!
ReplyDeletevery seductive!
ReplyDeleteSizzling , sensual and seductive , you totally blew me off with this one Pree :)
ReplyDeleteAha!! :D
ReplyDeleteEcstasy expressed in verse. Nice.
ReplyDeletemmmm.......dark...silence only talking...and love all around!
ReplyDeleteWow! Seductive ;)
ReplyDeleteHmm...ecstasy! Sounds deliciously like it ;)
ReplyDeleteSensual...Sizzling...Loved it!
ReplyDeleteMore, please.
ReplyDeletevery sensual indeed!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Everyone. :)
ReplyDelete~Pree at her White Window
Fantastic Preeti! Tempting poem
ReplyDeletekya baat ji kyaa baat! lagta hein ek aur baar ll karna padega cigerrete ke bare mein poochne ke liye :P :D
ReplyDeleteThis is sheer brilliance. How can light and dark be synonymous? Here's how! Both the light and dark have been used so exquisitely to create the effect...lovely writing!
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