Let the Zephyr caress you in a sylvan gait,
Through the slivers of your heart o li’l mermaid.
From lullabies to Sonatas to umpteenth Ode,
O Zephyr, caress her too with songs of abode.
Fondle her with a gentle kiss, Ruffle past her heart.
Spell out the memories golden whilst thee depart.
Paint a smile fonder than ever for her morrows,
Before faraway you run, Melt all my mermaid’s sorrows.
~**~
nice ode for someone who has been so close to you.
ReplyDeletesorry bout today was totally in a different mood.sorry
A sweet one!
ReplyDeletevery cute ,till the end,including the pic !!
ReplyDeleteBhalo Theko
Tc
CU
AWWWWW!!! I loved every word! and the pic!
ReplyDeletecutest...nice...sweet..!!
ReplyDeletehello dear..welcome back...how are you doing??? Its been ages that i read you....I mean you were also not that frequent as you used to be earlier..Missed you yaar..!!!
Welcome Back..!!!
hiii.. welcome back..:)..u hav posted after many daysssss..any wayss its a nice come back..
ReplyDeleteloved the lines...:) keep writing...
EXCELLENT... th tribute fits as much 2 Khushi as it fits 4 th Poetess. kp writing n do well. godbless. BK junior..
ReplyDeleteHey Preety dear;
ReplyDeleteHow are you...?
You're back with such a lovely poem, with an archaic touch! The real poetess!
That picture...the lovely dog, is that yours? You love pets?
Please stay for good!
Miss yah dear!!! ^.^
Thats soooooooooooo sweeet! And very very cute pic! :)
ReplyDeleteThis one is just "WOW" u r really too good at poetry!
AWWW so sweet
ReplyDeletep.S this just reminded me of how much i miss my dogs:)
it makes a smile on my face...nicely penned preety :)..
ReplyDeleteurs..hemu..
Wow! why did I ever stop blogging?
ReplyDeleteWonderfully worded by a genius with words!It came straight from your heart and stuck a chord in mine! Hey girlie...srry abt not replying back sooner. Can you add me on facebook? I will try to find you and then we can be in touch more often:) Will post a blog about my disappearance soon...
Mithe
aww... she is such a cutie :-).
ReplyDeleteAnd the poem is so sweet :-)