Spreading the wings of Divine aura
Ubiquitously beckons uber beauty.
Naval of the universe with fire unfurled
River of life flows relentlessly.
Indeterminate radiance brightens the Within
Sparkling the soul as a Glorified Mystic.
Ends the dark abyss, the Helios' Touch
~***~
P.S: My first ever acrostic poem is inspired from the beautiful picture of 'Sunrise' above, clicked by Sourish- the Day Dreamer at Assi Ghat-Banaras. I so fell in love with this pic instantly that I shamelessly asked it from him as my b'day gift. The sweetheart he is, he immediately gifted it to me with all its claims and authorities. So, legally this pic is mine now :p but the sweetest-heart that I am, I give all the credits to him. :)
This poem is my small token of love dedicated to u, sourish! :)
P.P.S: I am so sorry for not blogging as well as reading all your blogs regularly. still stuck up with lots of works.
This is your "first ever acrostic poem", for real? It sure doesn't seem that way. It seems to be from an experienced writer.
ReplyDeleteWell done, you! It complements the photograph very well. I like the "divine" take. Keep writing!!!
eautiful like the sunrise !! some pics really inspire :) !! good to see u blog !
ReplyDeleteAmazing :)
ReplyDeleteThe poetry compliments the pic! It seems both are incomplete without each other.
BEautiful!!! :)
i love this style...and the way u comeup with words..wow..
ReplyDeletetc n cheers
twweennyy tat was BEUtiful...
ReplyDeleteloved it truly :) :)
love yaa!!
huggggggggsss :)
take care!!
miss ya!!tweeeny!!
ReplyDeleteBiotiful :P good one preetzie!!as beutiful as the sunrise itself.. tho wuts happening??
ReplyDeletethis is beautiful...
ReplyDeletewat would we be but rotten ash but for the helios touch :)
take care mate... cheers...
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThe picture as well as the acrostic! :)
Amazing picture and the words match it to the hilt!
ReplyDeletebeautifully written .I cant believe this is your first acrostic poem.!.
ReplyDeletePic was very enlightening..!
My first visit here..wud love to follow this lovely blog..!
Cheers
good effort,, doesnt seems to the first one :)
ReplyDeletekeep up the good work!
Thanks for your comment.
ReplyDeleteI liked the beautiful presentation of your poem with lovely picture.You are really a very good poet.You have written the poem as wonderful as the sunrise.
nicely written! and the pic is wonderful too.. :D
ReplyDeletehope to see more acrostic poems from u! :)
cheers
Yayie preetilata!!!! i made it finally!!!
ReplyDeleteme no likes blogspot!
:|
but what me loves is this acrostic!!
i used to do acrostics for friends names on their bday cards in school
but urs is like WOW!!!
u did complete justice to that pic that inspired this piece!
literary to my liking is what ur blog is girl!! :D
for a first, this is very well done :-)
ReplyDeletethe picture is awesome and even more so ur poetry...loved it
ReplyDeleteAJEY
ReplyDeletethanks a lot ajey. it was indeed my 1st attempt at serious acro. bfr it i was to do it wen i was in school with our names but then i never knw it's a form of a serious poetry.
thanks a lot for ur support. ur encouraging words always pushes me ahead.
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PRATZ
thanks a lot dear. it feels great to get appreciation from some1 who is the queen of acrostic.
i am yet not into regular blogging dear. the reasons being many :(
take care. :)
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AKANKSHA
so very glad that u liked it. thanks a lot dear. happy to knw that i have justified the beautiful pic with my poem.
take care. hugs :)
RABBIT
ReplyDeletethank you so much friend. i am so very glad :)
take care.
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SWATI
tweeny darling.. ab tune kaha hai to maan leti hu but it's not more beautiful than u is. :p meri baat ko maan le aur chup kar ke baith. :p ;)
but love u truly kya matlab... isse pahale kya falsly hota tha :p :D ;)
love u sooooooooooo much. hugyzzz... n oye dont miss me coz i am always thr inside ur heart na.
muahhhhhhhhhh :)
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ANIZIE
awweeee thanks a lot anizie. u knw na, ur words mean a lot to me. :)
lot of things happening dear. laptop not working is one of them :p :(
take care :)
ARV
ReplyDeletethanks a lot mate.
take care. cheers to u too :)
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MEERA
thank you dear. :)
xmz over? hope they went well. :)
stay blessed.
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MEENA
thank you dear. happy to knw that u liked it. :)
take care. :)
VYSHU
ReplyDeletea warm welcome to my blog.
i am so very glad that u loved the poem. thank you so so soooooo much.
the pic is really amazing. so enlightening that it inspires. :)
thanks to follow and appreciate my blog. it really means a lot. u too have a very beautiful blog and yes from now count me as ur regular reader.
thanks a lot vyshu. :)
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DEEPIKA
a warm welcome to my blog.
i am so very glad that u appreciated the poem. thank you so so soooooo much.
hope to see you around again.
take care. :)
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BABLI
ur words meant a lot to me. thanks for the appreciation . they encouraged me to no end.
thank you.
take care :)
SWETHA
ReplyDeletethanks a lot dear. me too hopes to write more and more acros.
take care :)
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CRAFTY
yippieee dear.. finally u r here.
me likes d wordpress's comment section a lot. i wish blogspot had it too. but i hate blogspot when it doesn't allow u to comment. :x
same here dear. i too used to do them same but never realized it is a serious form of poetry. :p
thank you so much dear. i am so very glad for it. appreciation from frenz like u means a lot. u always encourage me. n i hope to get ur support always.
i know u know that i love ur blog too. don't u know i dear? .. i know.. u know :)
hugsssssss :)
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RAAJI
thank you so much dear.
take care :)
RUSH
ReplyDeletethanks a lot rush. i am so very glad.
take care :)
B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L
ReplyDeleteThe language used is simply amazing :)
Thanks for liking my photos... I saw your comments there.. I liked your template very much. Do you not feel templates reveal the nature of a person? yours reveal a person who has an artistic mind! The poem is matching the picture!
ReplyDeleteI liked the photo too! And I dont know why I am meeting only poets this year!! :-P
Each word came shining through like the rays of the sun... inspiring.
ReplyDeleteI hope you have been well...
:-)
Good poem. Keep wriitng more.
ReplyDeleteTc.
Quite a jugalbandi between you and Sourish..keep it up!!
ReplyDeletelucky sourish..:)
ReplyDeleteThe poem is so good...
ReplyDeleteI loved the 3rd line though.. :)
& the picture is absolutely lovely.....
A great piece of a snap. I am in awe.
Hats of 2 sourish... :)
tatzz a nice Acrostic,, :-)
ReplyDeletedoesn't seem like ur first time.. :-) the pic is beautiful,, no wonder it inspired u to write those lovely lines.. :-)
First attempt? Whoa! Beautiful would be an understatement. Loved it, buddy! Keep writing!
ReplyDeletePeace. Be well.
MISS KIDDO
ReplyDeleteT.H.A.N.K.Y.O.U Kiddo :)
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SHANTUNU
a warm welcome to my blog. :)
yep i agree to u on what u said regarding my template. thnx a lot but d credit for it goes to my soulsis lena. :)
thanks a lot for appreciating my poem as well as the photo. u too have got a lovely photo blog.
n i think u r plain lucky to meet only poet this year :p
hope to c u around again. :)
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PIXIE
thanks a lot for d appreciation as well as the encouragement dear.
i have been good. hope u too are :)
INDRAJIT
ReplyDeleteThank you.
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RAHUL
wowwww what comment. n i enjoyed this jugalbandi a lot. yet waiting for sourish's response on it. :)
thank you rahul :)
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CHRIZ
Nah! lucky is me. luckiest sourish :D :P
Thank you :)
MUTHU
ReplyDeleteYou know, even my fav is the 3rd line. thanks a lot. :)
n i totally agree with u on the pic. me will be always in awe of it.
n yes hats off to sourish :)
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MUZER
i am so very glad girl. thanks a lot for ur love and support.
but all credit goes to the pic :)
hugz :)
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KARTZ
well well... aap hi ke comment ka intazar ho raha tha :) apart from sourish's. it seems hv to wait some more time for sourish :(
thank u ! thank u!
let me tell u, ur appreciation and comments means a lot. :)
take care. :)
:) :)
ReplyDeletekeep writing, sweets! this one was indeed very good!
love you!
oye like hamesha mast likha hei re..loved the idea of divine aura..
ReplyDelete:) n here me sorry 4 tah latest(late):P comment :(
hugs
first time on your blog ... and m just impressed :) nice !
ReplyDeleteawww that was so beeeeeeeeeeeuuuuuuuuuuuuutiful!!!! and it was so sweet of you to dedicate it to him..
ReplyDeleteand my blogs been missing you a lot , as yours has been missing mine. im back now. hope you'll be back soon. then we'll be even :)
till then,
hugz
take care
beautiful poem preeti!:) anyone would get inspired with such picture where nature at its best.
ReplyDeleteI have a similar picture. Good snap,DD! :)
ReplyDeleteand oh..I like this idea of an acrostic..very unique..
Sunrise n sunsets.. my fave have always been Sunsets..
Btw..whats the Helios' touch? Englighten me, please!:)
hey preetilata! long time no post! all's okay i hope!
ReplyDeletehugs! :D
oye hoyeeeeee
ReplyDeleteDedication waaah waaah waah
really I am out of words...and the way u complimented the pic with that acrostic...mesmerizing .... :P
thank u thank u.....
and love u loads for this......
u made my day :)
awwee, wud luv to talk to ya.. drop me a mail tellin wen i cud find ya online..
ReplyDeletebeautiful...great wordings used
ReplyDeleteliked this line
Sparkling the soul as a Glorified Mystic
hats off to u....seems like its a work of professional poet
waiting for more of such kind
one request too....do post a heartbreaking poem :)
beautiful.
ReplyDeletemy signs were high and low :)
I dont know which to appreciate
ReplyDeletethe poem or the picture that inspired the poem.
They are good actually beautiful.
I dont know which to appreciate
ReplyDeletethe poem or the picture that inspired the poem.
They are good actually beautiful.
Wonderful...
ReplyDeleteThe last line was the besti as per me..
keep writing..
:)
Hey preeti.
ReplyDeleteHow ya doing?..
Take care gal..!
Come back to blogwrld soon ..
Cheers
no new posts? :|
ReplyDeleteAwesome! This is my first visit here, as soon as I read white window I went say so cute and this template made me feel so bright. I love it completely!
ReplyDelete=)
Hey sis!! u rock.. n i know dis s not ya 1st poem..
ReplyDeleteyou are tagged...!!!
ReplyDeletevisit my Land of Dreams...!!!
hii..m back again..hope u remb me..started a new blog..nd writing again..missed readin ur blog..n i must say lovely poem...nd it soo butifuly compliments d pic..
ReplyDeletehave fun..cheers..
it fills life with energy ...
ReplyDeletejai ho ganga maiya.........
how ru dear??
i am fine
Take Care
Vikas{V}
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