Tuesday, December 16, 2008

~MOON~ "A NONET"


Sylvan décor on the horizon
Pearlish complexion in stillness
Rhapsody in silken night
Calmness spills the beauty
Shimmers splendorous
Heaven’s halo
Virtuous
Pristine
Moon!!

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NONET:A nonet has nine lines. The first line has 9 syllables, the second line 8 syllables, the third line 7 syllables, and so on... until line nine finishes with 1 syllable. It can be on any subject and rhyming is optional.
Posted by at 11:14:00 PM
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48 comments:

  1. LenaDecember 16, 2008 at 11:23 PM

    you are the master on nonets!!
    did i say it was beautiful?? I lied!
    It is marvellous, brilliant, awesome! :)

    Loved it so much sweetie! :)

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  2. lukkydivzDecember 16, 2008 at 11:58 PM

    you are the master on nonets!!
    did i say it was beautiful?? I lied!
    It is marvellous, brilliant, awesome! :)

    Loved it so much pt-moti-potty :)

    lena copied my comment :( :( shez a copy cat :|

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  3. LenaDecember 17, 2008 at 12:10 AM

    lol divs is such a copucat, huh? :x

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  4. AnonymousDecember 17, 2008 at 1:01 AM

    wow very nice!

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  5. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 3:51 AM

    @lena,

    :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

    (((((((hugs)))))))))

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  6. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 3:52 AM

    @divz,

    :D :p :D :P :D

    (((((HUGS)))))

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  7. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 3:54 AM

    @ lena,

    u r a cat and divz is a copy cat rathr copy-donks-monks-chimponks :)

    ((((((hugs 2 both of u))))))))))))

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  8. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 3:55 AM

    @ d lover

    welcome here.

    thanks a lot.

    do come agn :)

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  9. RamblerDecember 17, 2008 at 7:12 AM

    hey a very nice attempt.."Rhapsody in the silken nights"..this was cool

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  10. Yamini MeduriDecember 17, 2008 at 7:24 AM

    wow......cute...!!!

    i loved it.....and specially the topic was asweet one to write a nonnet on and you articulated them perfectly......good going dear...!!!

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  11. muZerDecember 17, 2008 at 7:49 AM

    tatzz a beauty.. da moon n ur lovely nonnet.. :-)

    beautiful lines,, Preeti.. :-)

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  12. muZerDecember 17, 2008 at 7:49 AM

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  13. ArvDecember 17, 2008 at 7:59 AM

    wow mate... that was an interesting way to describe the moon... loved it...

    have a good day mate.. cheers...

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  14. Hemanth PotluriDecember 17, 2008 at 8:10 AM

    mooon ...chadamama...thats soo awesome way to describe it :)...preetz dear i need to know how to rite one..will u pls mail it to me..u know i am week in syllables making things :P....


    and the fight between divz and lena is soo smiley always :)...

    urs..hemu..

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  15. VinzDecember 17, 2008 at 9:42 AM

    Nice attempt...
    liked it..!!

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  16. --xh--December 17, 2008 at 10:18 AM

    now, this is really nice... :)

    (nice template )

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  17. olimpiaDecember 17, 2008 at 10:29 AM

    .....mmmmmmm....special and magical moment:the moon...greately surprised by an earth-born !....extraordinary depicted image .

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  18. AnonymousDecember 17, 2008 at 10:31 AM

    good lord, this is nonnet season...
    and u happen to be the queen at this!! :)

    first coffee and now moon...!! :D
    wow... that was brilliant...!! :)

    hats off to u dear...!!

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  19. CяystalDecember 17, 2008 at 4:07 PM

    Beauifully penned down..

    Its my ultimate love..I seriously love its light illuminating darkness! :)

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  20. IndrajitDecember 17, 2008 at 8:32 PM

    Way to go from here.This is not the best one,as the best is yet to come.
    And very soon Poetess.
    Take care

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  21. AnonymousDecember 17, 2008 at 11:11 PM

    lovely! keep on Preethi...

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  22. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 11:36 PM

    @rambler,

    thanks :)

    even i love that one a lot :)

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  23. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 11:38 PM

    @yamini,

    thanks a lot dear. :)

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  24. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 11:40 PM

    @muzer,

    so sweet of u dear.

    thanks a lot :)

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  25. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 11:41 PM

    @arv,

    :)

    glad u liked it.

    thanks :)

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  26. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 11:43 PM

    @hemz,

    :)
    :D
    ;)
    :P

    YEP aftr all ther r d official smile spreaders of smiley tissues :)

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  27. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 11:45 PM

    @vinz,

    thank you :)

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  28. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 11:46 PM

    @anoop,

    thank you.

    templt credit---->solely to my soul sis lena :)

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  29. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 11:46 PM

    @olimpia,

    mamma i so very much love ur comments and i so very much love u too :)

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  30. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 11:49 PM

    @vinay,

    wat me a nonet queen?? wowww...with all my thnks to u i accept this honour whole heartedly :p ;)

    Thanks a lot dear. glad that u loved it.

    n no 1st is not the coffe..1st one is "the birth".

    again thnks a lot dear :)

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  31. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 11:51 PM

    @aaayushi,

    thanks aayu :)

    yes..moon is magical..miracle...:)

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  32. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 11:52 PM

    @indrajit,

    thanks for the wishes n d belief in me.

    yes d best is yet to come and will come very soon. :)

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  33. Preetilata【ツ】December 17, 2008 at 11:52 PM

    @mithe,

    thanks dear :)

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  34. Mel Avila AlarillaDecember 18, 2008 at 2:33 AM

    Wow, such brilliant piece of poetry. It is really remarkable that with the limitations of a nonet (?) you were still able to convey the existential message of your poem. The moon photo is also marvelous and has added luster to your poem. I like the poem. It's a perfect 10 for me. Thanks for the fantastic poem. Merry Christmas and a Prosperous New Year to you and your loved ones.

    Warm regards,
    Mel

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  35. Anil SawanDecember 18, 2008 at 4:44 AM

    nonets.... hrd about it for the first time in some blog.. english is like mystery! :P you proved to be a genious :)

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  36. Farah DeenDecember 18, 2008 at 1:11 PM

    absolutely mind blowing! you are a talented writer and I really love this particular one. very beautifully written.

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  37. IndrajitDecember 18, 2008 at 1:47 PM

    Dis pic is no less marvellous.
    lokkng at ths pic..u Cud even write anothr Nonet, another Moon... U can do it..
    :)
    Tc

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  38. NAVAL LANGADecember 18, 2008 at 1:53 PM

    I have come here from Ms. Sameera's poetry blogs. I read some of your posts and would like to revisit your blog for reading more from you.

    If you like short stories and paintings, then a short visit to my blogs would be a refreshing one.

    Naval Langa
    http://cleanfiction.blogspot.com/

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  39. RiverSoulDecember 19, 2008 at 10:21 AM

    Forgive my lateness, preeti,
    Actually, i'd already read this long back, but hadn't commented.
    :)
    You see, I've got no knowledge of nonnets...
    But anyway, this was quite nice
    :)

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  40. Preetilata【ツ】December 19, 2008 at 11:53 PM

    @sawan,

    yes english is seriously a mystry.

    n do i master it?..lol :p

    thanks a lot :)

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  41. Preetilata【ツ】December 19, 2008 at 11:54 PM

    @mel,

    thanks a lot mel for liking n appreciating my poem.

    wish u too merry christmas :)

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  42. Preetilata【ツ】December 19, 2008 at 11:55 PM

    @farah,

    thanks a lot farah dear for :)

    m so very glad that u hv love it :)

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  43. Preetilata【ツ】December 19, 2008 at 11:57 PM

    @indrajit,

    thanks pal. yes i agree the pic is so very beautiful and yes we can write another on moon by looking it. so this time..it's ur turn :)

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  44. Preetilata【ツ】December 19, 2008 at 11:57 PM

    @naval,

    welcome here.

    thanks for liking my post.

    will surely gv ur blog a visit.

    do come again :)

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  45. Preetilata【ツ】December 19, 2008 at 11:59 PM

    @sid,

    oh come on dont say sorry again :)

    hey comments don't matter. u hv read it and thats enough. trust me.

    thanks a ton sid :)


    take care :)

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  46. Sameera AnsariDecember 21, 2008 at 12:09 AM

    This is not the first literary work I have read on the moon,but this is surely the best I have read about her :)

    Awesome nonnet from the Nonnet Queen :P

    Love you angel!Hugsss

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  47. Preetilata【ツ】December 21, 2008 at 11:28 PM

    @sameera,

    me a nonnet queen??.. wowwww i happily accept the title :P

    thank you so much my darling angel :)

    love n huggsssssss :)

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  48. AkankshaJuly 27, 2012 at 11:55 PM

    That was heavenly! :)

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plz.. open d white window :)

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