"Graceful shines the sun,
Spreading its rays all around-
New saplings come out."
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Haiku is one of the most important form of traditional Japanese poetry, where the poems are simple, small and not rhymed. It is nothing but a depiction of nature in its innumerable aspects.
Few simple rules for writing in this form of poetry are:1. Three lines of verse consisting of five, seven, and five syllables.2. Each haiku must contain a seasonal word, may not strictly be a typical one. For example: snow denotes winter.P.S : This is my second attempt at Haiku.
you know it is all dark here and no sun, no light, no sunshine... your haiku made me feel it all is back.. :)
ReplyDeleteThats the power of words.. which can bring the light back to life :)
Loved the haiku :)
Loved the pic :)
Love you :)
mam this is one worthy attempt of writing haiku i must say.. because i sure liked it,, :)
ReplyDeleteSaplings are out with the leaves of hope, for a better tomorrow, I guess
ReplyDeletegood thought,good attempt at Haiku!
From the frothy coffee to birth of a sapling,great going
keep it up
Tc
CU
simple yet beautiful
ReplyDeleteAhaa.. Preeti.. u r on a roll.. tis mornin i read da Nonnet.. n now a Haiku.. :-)
ReplyDeletenice one,, in da winters,, itzz gud read abt sunshine.. :-)
The last nonnet was amazing... This s simple and sweet... Thnks fr droppin by!!!
ReplyDeletesimple, yet so nice.. loved it.... :D
ReplyDeleteheheheh
ReplyDeleteHaiku sounds easy.... :P
lemme try..
Shiny drops fall from sky
Crying she wiping her eyes
Rain soothes the heart ...
tell me :P
haiku sounds easy... i'll try later...!! :)
ReplyDeleteu wrote this one brilliantly!! :)
and warmness during winter could be felt!! :)
hahaha janu at 12.30 am in the night (ur time) u say so innocently - u know there is no sun no light all dark :D
ReplyDeletehahahahahahahahaha so cute :D :D
@pt-moti-potty :P
:D khoob bhalo :P hahah i'm just assuming it means- very good :P
the pic is soo beautiful :)....and the haiku is sweet :)....like u :)...
ReplyDeleteurs..hemu..
P.S:angry on u :P....not coming to my place at all x-(..
Loved this haiku, gal
ReplyDelete:)
;)
Loved the pic too
:)
Wow. A new thing again.
ReplyDeleteA long time to go for spring to dawn,but this Haiku made me feel as it's already here :)
ReplyDeleteHugs!
I read haiku on some other blog oo but couldn't understand what it was..Thank you for making it clear.Would like to try my hand sometime...:)
ReplyDeleteI like the name-->"Haiku".
ReplyDeleteAnd needless to say,Preetu..it was good.
Isn't it an experience in itself to see a sapling that your planted growing stronger day by day..till it becomes a tree.AH!
Neat!
About the pic:-
ReplyDeleteIt is as if amid the sprawling ,enormous canvas of pleasant green, the radiant shafts of the sun's rays in merry abundance glorifies a life- a Life being nurtured
by the Creator. The Creator holds and garnishes the blessed Life in the radiance galore.
The whole pic depicts blessedness-Otherworldly- almost bordering on Godliness.
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About the poem:-
It just compliments the pic (and vice-versa) creating a Majestic aura.
The poem utters the beauty of the pic in a picturesque manner.
Heaven is no far , but just somewhere near, very near- The marriage of the pic and the poesia whispers so.
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:)
great info for me. i was wondering what haiku meant when I saw your update in my blogroll. oh btw preeti, i think, you are not getting my entry update because my blog is private now.
ReplyDeleteRevitalising lines :)
ReplyDeleteand I so love the Haikus :)
Good one mate... cheers...
.......spring...
ReplyDeletelights and green explosion,
Preety's birth.
wow
ReplyDeletewill soon try something on HAIKU
but yours is simply superb...!!!
Such a lovely haiku
ReplyDeleteand the meaning so profound
beauty ! :)
ohh nice dear
ReplyDeleten i think i hav been writing haiku unknoingly till now
you are awarded in my blog...congratulations..!!!
ReplyDeletehmm.. hav read haiku poetry b4.. never have tried it myself though.. u'rs .. :) well.. frankly .. it inspires me.. so does u'r nonet.. gr8 work.. n a gr8 blog..
ReplyDeleteWonderful attempt at Haiku...lemme c if i cud do one...
ReplyDeleteHello……
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing!! I am so glad to found your blog!
You are welcomed to my blog…….
Wishing you in advance "A Merry X'Mas and A Happy New Year''