Thursday, February 14, 2008

For Anonymous ;)


I was wandering in this world like an ignorent soul,
Knew nothing about love and life as a whole.
Suddenly.. You came to my life
As quietly as possible
And you touched me...and changed me as quietly as possible.
For me you are not the wild storm
But the pleasant… soft wind
Full of fresh love and cares to the hilt...
You are the sea full of Love and maturity..
I am the free flowing river of emotions lacking maturity...
You are not the rose that can be found everywhere
But some wild rare flower..
That only few can get.
I am the deer... and you are the forest,
I am the bird...and you are the sky,
I am the rain... and you are the cloud,
I am the ray...but you are the sun,
I am the moon ...but you are the nite,
I am the fire....but you are the light,
I am the rock...and you are my strength.
You are the heart...but I am the beats,
You are the life...and I am the soul..
You are the one..who made me believe..
That I am beautiful and as special as a queen.
You are the one..who made me to feel
That my silly heart is also capable of loving.
Thanx for coming to my life as a friend.
Thanx for taking me to the wild wild rain.
Thanx for bringing my real self out.
Thanx for givin me the voice
To shout out loud..
Now I can see that the world is truely beautiful..
And I m as beautiful as the dew drops on the grass..
Now my life is not the same anymore..
Because now I know how to love freely..
Now my heart beats for love...and with love only..
And every beat of mine shouts that

I LOVE YOU ..and..YOU ONLY.....
~~~***~~~
Wrote this silly poem atleast two years ago....so u must have found hell lot of childish elements in it. but still i love the poem so much :D ....cos that's what i am... a big time silly :P
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Wish you all a Very Happy Valentine's DAY. :)
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25 comments:

  1. PriyaFebruary 14, 2008 at 2:29 AM

    Ther is so much innocence and I love it.

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  2. Preetilata【ツ】February 14, 2008 at 2:32 AM

    wowww..priya... d post ws not yet done...n here's ur lovely commnt.

    thnx dear priya.....wish u a very happy valentine's day.

    love u..tk cr
    :) :) :)

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  3. LukkydivsFebruary 14, 2008 at 2:53 AM

    lolz ur poem is not silly :x its lovely :D

    now im into thoughts on who the lucky anony is :)

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  4. bobby burchamFebruary 14, 2008 at 4:21 AM

    Your words have life and spirit. You communicate fantasies and vivid emotions. Innocence and honesty is not silliness. Keep up your awesome creative writing.

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  5. black coffeeFebruary 14, 2008 at 4:38 AM

    its cuuuuute!
    love u darls,
    akki

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  6. SandhyaFebruary 14, 2008 at 10:06 AM

    hi dear...

    'Now I can see that the world is truely beautiful..
    And I m as beautiful as the dew drops on the grass..'

    hey u r amazing... i swear....

    BTW Happy Valentine's day.... So, aaj to madam date par ja rahi hongi.... dont tell lie now:-))))

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  7. --xh--February 14, 2008 at 10:20 AM

    happy V day. the poem is apt for teh day:)

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  8. IndrajitFebruary 14, 2008 at 1:04 PM

    Innocent thoughts spilled into papers.:)
    The discovery and the joy tht came forth in this person whn he / she realises th unheard beats of life is sweetly brought along here.
    1 Unknown entity once said ages ago,"Jo saraL haI , wohI satyA Hai."
    Wohi saralta ka pratiruup hai ye kavita.
    N yes, chldish elemnst r thre, n tht makes it even sweeter..
    Good hai ji.Keep wriitng.

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  9. Mel Avila AlarillaFebruary 14, 2008 at 1:32 PM

    Hi Preetilata,
    Happy Valentines Day to you and your loved ones. That was a very beautiful and moving poem. It is so natural and
    endearing. I love it for it speaks from the heart. Never lose that idealism and zest for life in you. God bless you and your family always.

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  10. k@lp@jeetFebruary 14, 2008 at 1:53 PM

    preeti....wish you a very happy valentines day....

    Now my life is not the same anymore..
    Because now I know how to love freely..
    Now my heart beats for love...and with love only..
    And every beat of mine shouts that

    I LOVE YOU ..and..YOU ONLY.....

    the above stanza of your cute poem....straight from your heart....says every thing you wanted to express....keep on loving sweetheart....i am sure....your zest for life will create more beautiful poems....all the best.

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  11. Preetilata【ツ】February 14, 2008 at 5:44 PM

    @ divya,
    ok..ok.. i agree d poem is lovely..ab gussa mat ho..:D

    n kp on thinking who this lucky anony is..pata chal jay to mujhe v bata dena..:P

    LV U...MUAHHH..HUGGSSS..

    HAPPY VALENTINES DAY.

    TK CR
    :) :) :)

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  12. Preetilata【ツ】February 14, 2008 at 6:00 PM

    @bobby sir,

    thnx a lot sir. n yes i agree innocence n honesty r not silliness. oh! ur commnt alwys encourages me.

    love u sir.

    LV U...MUAHHH..HUGGSSS..

    HAPPY VALENTINES DAY.

    TK CR
    :) :) :)

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  13. Preetilata【ツ】February 14, 2008 at 6:01 PM

    @ akki,
    thnx akki darling.

    LV U...MUAHHH..HUGGSSS..

    HAPPY VALENTINES DAY.

    TK CR
    :) :) :)

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  14. Preetilata【ツ】February 14, 2008 at 6:02 PM

    @sandhya,

    thnx dear.

    but main aur date..:P

    LV U...MUAHHH..HUGGSSS..

    HAPPY VALENTINES DAY.

    TK CR
    :) :) :)

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  15. Preetilata【ツ】February 14, 2008 at 6:02 PM

    @-xh-

    thnx fren.

    HAPPY VALENTINES DAY.

    TK CR
    :) :) :)

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  16. Preetilata【ツ】February 14, 2008 at 6:04 PM

    @ indro,

    oh! indro! u dnt knw how much i am happy to read this commnt md by u. wowwww... it just made my day...m so happy..happy dear.

    HUGGSSS..

    HAPPY VALENTINES DAY.

    TK CR
    :) :) :)

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  17. Preetilata【ツ】February 14, 2008 at 6:06 PM

    @ mel,

    thnx a lot mel...ur commnts r very spcl. they encourages me so much. i am glad that u loved this poem.


    HAPPY VALENTINES DAY.

    TK CR
    :) :) :)

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  18. Preetilata【ツ】February 14, 2008 at 6:07 PM

    @kalpajeet da,
    oh! da! ... i love u too a lot. i nvr knew u will love this poem so much. yes i will keep d love n zest for life an will kp on loving n writting..u just be thr with me.

    LV U..HUGGSSS..

    HAPPY VALENTINES DAY.

    TK CR
    :) :) :)

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  19. Noushy SyahFebruary 14, 2008 at 7:22 PM

    Hi Preeti,
    Just the rite time on the rite day...the poem is lovely,I love the phrases "I am the deer... and you are the forest,
    I am the bird...and you are the sky,
    I am the rain... and you are the cloud,
    I am the ray...but you are the sun,
    I am the moon ...but you are the nite,
    I am the fire....but you are the light,
    I am the rock...and you are my strength.
    You are the heart...but I am the beats,
    You are the life...and I am the soul.."..that is so meaningful and lovely! You say it all!

    Thanks for sharing this lovely genuine from your heart with us.

    Have a lovely day and keep smiling.

    p/s glad that you're much better now..

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  20. LenaFebruary 15, 2008 at 5:12 PM

    Because now I know how to love freely..
    Now my heart beats for love...and with love only..
    And every beat of mine shouts that

    I LOVE YOU ..and..YOU ONLY.....

    soo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet :) and not silly at all.. loved the poem like the ones before too :)


    Love you dumbiiiiiiiiiiii :P
    take care!

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  21. Sameera AnsariFebruary 15, 2008 at 5:43 PM

    Who said that was silly girl?You are really silly to think so :)

    This lovely poem shows that you were a good poetess always,so full of love !

    Happy Valentine's to you too Darling Angel!Love you loads.Hugssssssss

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  22. cm chapFebruary 16, 2008 at 7:29 AM

    Good one.. Though "I always wanna wander in this world like an ignorent soul" :-)

    You were honoured last week... Do u knw? he he... I hv updated my blog last week itself.

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  23. Occasional BrillianceFebruary 16, 2008 at 12:27 PM

    very cute and genuinely sweet

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  24. AnonymousFebruary 16, 2008 at 2:48 PM

    lovely words...you have crafted it beautifully...simply love the simplicity & the exquisiteness in the lines...love is something which brings out the child & the innocent in us....very romantic & perfect for this season...well written!

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  25. AnonymousFebruary 17, 2008 at 8:44 AM

    love it i have cancer :(

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plz.. open d white window :)

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