Friday, July 12, 2013

Lost Treasure

Blossoms of carnations cannot distract me anymore. For long they have kind of replaced your memories. Or should I say they've made your memories to blossom in the courtyard of my heart? You said that you were a mirage. A frivolous soul precisely! Whose existence would hold no importance in anyone’s life. Perhaps you were right as I carried on pretty well without you.

Through the window, like a gush of wild wind you entered one day and upturned the pitcher of my heart. It’s good that I lost you. How would I've treasured you in my numerous poems otherwise?



100 Words on Saturday - Write Tribe

This is in response to The Write Tribe Prompt
This week's prompt: Lost Treasure by Bhavya
Posted by at 4:45:00 AM
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23 comments:

  1. AkankshaJuly 12, 2013 at 4:58 AM

    Wow, Just Wow! So beautiful and serene. Loved every word!

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    1. Preetilata【ツ】July 12, 2013 at 2:43 PM

      Thanks Darls.

      Do you know that you bring in the sunshine through my window?? <3

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  2. Dew dropsJuly 12, 2013 at 5:30 AM

    nice plot preeti..u r a pro....awesome work!:)

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    1. Preetilata【ツ】July 12, 2013 at 2:44 PM

      Wow! So nice to see you here Mansi.

      Thank you so much. Your words always means a lot to me. <3

      Come again soon. :)

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  3. Kajal KapurJuly 12, 2013 at 7:42 AM

    That's interesting...a good take on the prompt.

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  4. Corinne RodriguesJuly 12, 2013 at 4:29 PM

    Always fascinated with the imagery you manage to create - it's an art, Pree!

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    1. Preetilata【ツ】July 12, 2013 at 10:01 PM

      Words from you fill me with so much of happiness and enthusiasm.

      Thank you Corinne.

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  5. kalpana solsiJuly 12, 2013 at 5:22 PM

    How would I've treasured you in my numerous poems otherwise?

    Lovely lines. and I love carnations.

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  6. UnknownJuly 12, 2013 at 5:52 PM

    Hi pree. I am fortunate that I landed on your site. Your narrative is splendid. Very beautifully written.with a sweet fragrance!!

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  7. PixieJuly 12, 2013 at 6:44 PM

    Thank you for leaving the link!!
    Loved it and you write so well!! :)

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  8. Afshan ShaikJuly 12, 2013 at 11:03 PM

    Dil jeet lia mademoiselle !

    Touched!

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  9. AnonymousJuly 13, 2013 at 2:53 AM

    Brilliant Preetilata! Just loved every word of it. Waiting to read more of your writings.

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  10. Ankur AnandJuly 13, 2013 at 5:01 AM

    so nice and serene !

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  11. drgmemoirJuly 13, 2013 at 9:00 AM

    beautiful sweetie.. nice to see your writing.... lots of love

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  12. Bhavya NJuly 13, 2013 at 10:34 AM

    You've beautifully captured the image in your words Pree :) Lovely.

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  13. olimpiaJuly 13, 2013 at 7:59 PM

    Writting remains a particular value of yours .Hugs.

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  14. JANUJuly 14, 2013 at 8:50 PM

    Nice one again.

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  15. JeevanJuly 16, 2013 at 4:00 PM

    Beautiful! Keep it up :)

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  16. Anil SawanJuly 19, 2013 at 5:46 PM

    you know how much i love you for the emotions you pen, don't you? :)

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plz.. open d white window :)

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