ख़्याल- तितलियाँ है.
आँखों से ओंझल होते ही
कायनात में समा जाती है.
वक़्त की धार जब सबकुछ बहा ले जाती है
इन बिखरे शब्दो के जाल में
आँसू और मुस्कान-
कुछ छाप छोड़ जाते है.
गुनगुनाने के लिए उम्र भर.
दिल रोता है तो हमेशा
आँसू ही नहीं बहते.
कुछ और भी है.
खुश होने के लिए मौके
कल्पनाओं में भी मिल जाते हैं
कभी कभी.
शायद लिखने भर से हीं
सुकून सा कुछ मिल जाता हैं
रूह को जीने के लिए.
आँखों से ओंझल होते ही
कायनात में समा जाती है.
वक़्त की धार जब सबकुछ बहा ले जाती है
इन बिखरे शब्दो के जाल में
आँसू और मुस्कान-
कुछ छाप छोड़ जाते है.
गुनगुनाने के लिए उम्र भर.
दिल रोता है तो हमेशा
आँसू ही नहीं बहते.
कुछ और भी है.
खुश होने के लिए मौके
कल्पनाओं में भी मिल जाते हैं
कभी कभी.
शायद लिखने भर से हीं
सुकून सा कुछ मिल जाता हैं
रूह को जीने के लिए.
Beautiful poem, Preetilata! I love how you wove the positive in it.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite verse is:
खुश होने के लिए मौके
कल्पनाओं में भी मिल जाते हैं
कभी कभी.
So true for all of us. Thank you for sharing. It is a long time since I read Hindi poetry online...Hugs!
Thank you Vi. Your feedback means a lot to me.
DeleteAnd yes it's true for all of us and that i think is the beauty of writing.
Hugs right back to you.
कुछ छाप छोड़ जाते है.
ReplyDeleteगुनगुनाने के लिए उम्र भर.
So true. Certain memories are like that. :)
P.S : I didn't get this line "शायद लिखने भर से हीं "
"शायद लिखने भर से हीं "
DeleteJyothi I tried to convey that 'perhaps by writing...'
Thank you so much.
Yes, writing is perhaps the best thing a soul can do to find peace!
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DeleteThat's one of the greatest outcomes of writing. Aha! the joys that writing provides to us.
DeleteThanks Corinne.
Beautiful Preetilata.
ReplyDeleteशायद लिखने भर से हीं
सुकून सा कुछ मिल जाता हैं
रूह को जीने के लिए.
Thanks Ava.
DeleteGood to see you here. :)
Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant !
ReplyDeleteThanks Thanks Thanks my dear Ruch.
DeleteThanks once again for the special mention on our WT.
AMAZING! Beautifully written Preeti! :)
ReplyDeleteIt took some time for me to read this and its beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch Janu.
DeleteBeautiful Preetilata. I've read hindi after a long long time so took a little time to read.
ReplyDeleteLove the lines
शायद लिखने भर से हीं
सुकून सा कुछ मिल जाता हैं
रूह को जीने के लिए.
I too write to free my soul and bring peace to my world.
Thanks Suzy.
DeleteI guess it's true for all of us and that i think is the beauty of writing.
wow!! Amazing!
ReplyDeleteMy Hindi is a bit weak, but I took help with the translation and its simply lovely!! :)
Thanks Pixie for appreciating as well as putting an extra effort to read it.
DeleteHow beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteHindi defntly makes a poem GORGEOUS! wish I could write like this. Even if my poem means the same its not beautiful like this
loved these lines
शायद लिखने भर से हीं
सुकून सा कुछ मिल जाता हैं
रूह को जीने के लिए.
WAH!
oye chup kar else i will call you by the name Afsaaaaaaaaan. :P
DeleteYou have no idea how beautifully you write... so now stop cribbing.
Thanks Afshu dear for the appreciation. :)
oh how! the change of language sure brought out the best in the prompt. All emotions evoked are so heartfelt among us writers..
ReplyDeleteRicha
Thanks Richa for such lovely and kind words. You made me feel that i really did a commendable job by writing about this prompt in Hindi.
DeleteHope you'll visit again.
beautiful, Preetilata!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Roshni.
DeleteOh My God!! This is gorgeous poetry...!
ReplyDeleteIs it Bhavya?? :D
DeleteThank you so much. :)
Wow !! didn't know you write Hindi poetry too :)
ReplyDeleteYes Diana, sometimes. :)
DeleteThanks.
after ages i am actually reading so many sentences in hindi :-D
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem Preeti di. It just fits :) and a universe with your lost thoughts might still be a wonderful one to be a part of. Liked it!
ReplyDeleteTumhare ye shabd -- meri sooch ki seema langh rahain hai... ehsas ki dor kheench rahai hain.... aur maan mein deer tak yunhi tehel rahehain.....aur kabhi...kabhi.... dimak ki dahlij ko halke se khat khata ke... wapus laut rahe hain....
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