Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Corridors of my heart.


From the corridors of my heart
I see you in my morning sun. 
Warm and loving- 
Comforting my azure life. 

But I want you in my summer noons 
To burn me. To turn me. 

O! Burn me you sun 
And turn me to ashes- 
Make me yours.
Posted by at 11:03:00 AM
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22 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 3, 2013 at 11:08 AM

    Nice:)

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  2. Afshan ShaikApril 3, 2013 at 11:42 AM

    Loved the pic and words are fitting :)

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  3. UnknownApril 3, 2013 at 11:47 AM

    very nice, Preetilata!

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  4. UnknownApril 3, 2013 at 12:47 PM

    You're on the right track! Loved this one :)

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  5. SuzyApril 3, 2013 at 1:02 PM

    From the corridors of my heart I see you in my morning sun - that is beautiful. Agree with Afshan - pic and words go well together.

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  6. Shilpa GargApril 3, 2013 at 1:08 PM

    I have finally understood this poem... Honest confession... poems and me are like cheese and chalk... I have read your last 2 poems too... but you know I am a little dense with poems! :P

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  7. Tall Girl in Japan April 3, 2013 at 1:25 PM

    Amazing thoughts you penn here !

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  8. Mina MenonApril 3, 2013 at 1:27 PM

    u clicked this pic!!! Its mystic .. LOVED IT!

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  9. UnknownApril 3, 2013 at 4:10 PM

    Loved the Pic and the words too. :)

    - A fellow blogger from A to Z!

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  10. PRIYANKA DEYApril 3, 2013 at 4:23 PM

    reminded me of a wonderful song~~ A Fine Frenzy's Ashes and Wine.. :D Poised!

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  11. Corinne RodriguesApril 3, 2013 at 6:28 PM

    Mmmm...there's something so sensual about this one, Pree.

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  12. curryeggApril 3, 2013 at 7:30 PM

    I can't concentrate on the poem because I know who is the girl in the picture! Lol.. I want!

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  13. Salvwi PrasadApril 3, 2013 at 8:11 PM

    The last two posts of yours that I have read, I really loved the photograph and the poem complimenting each other. Both of them equally brilliant.

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  14. Vidya SuryApril 3, 2013 at 9:15 PM

    :-) Beautiful title and verse.

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  15. UnknownApril 3, 2013 at 10:12 PM

    intriguing , romantic and so sensual :) you are a real wordsmith aren't you ?:)

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  16. JANUApril 3, 2013 at 11:47 PM

    Definitely romantic.

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  17. sulekkhaApril 4, 2013 at 12:52 AM

    Moving poem, love and longing here.

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  18. olimpiaApril 4, 2013 at 10:26 AM

    Love.....desire....mistery between two people....How nice !

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  19. JeevanApril 4, 2013 at 10:58 PM

    awesome preeti :)

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  20. MitheApril 10, 2013 at 12:30 PM

    How beautifully you have equated the times of the day with love and longing! I did not know that afternoon would be represented so..whats the word?..majestically!

    Just one word..w.ow.!

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